Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Gymnastics haiku

Gymnastics

Doing flips in the stadium.
people shouting out my name.
golden victory.

4 comments:

  1. I like the way you use your imagination to create the picture.Just make sure your first line has 5 syllables.

    Good effort!
    Mr. J

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  2. That was so awesome Tori would you want to be a gymnast.

    by tyla

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  3. Hi Tori I like the excellent words you used in your haiku its lovely and I love it but would you really like to be a great gymnast- from your mate Cassie

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  4. Tori that is amazing I like your haiku poem




    madison

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