Friday, August 17, 2012


This week we looked at the I-Pad app called 3:15. It is a fun way to help you improve your story writing. This is my story!

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Friday night Jake, Zach and Alberto where at the pizza store down town from their house. They collected the pizzas but they were in such a rush that Alberto crashed into the door because he didn’t wait for the door to slide open. He was really lucky that he didn’t have the pizzas. When they got back Jake sliced the pizza but he noticed that it had alien eye balls on it so he thought that he would prank his mum. So he gave her a piece and suddenly she turned into an alien then their dad did the same and they just vanished.

Jake called Sherriff Lachlan he rushed to their house. At that moment the doorbell rang, they thought it was the sheriff but it turned out to be a man dressed in glasses, a black shirt and dark blue pants. He pulled out a flash light suddenly without warning it turned in to a gun and he zapped Alberto and he was out cold. Sherriff Lachlan arrived a few minutes later and they were locked in a gun fight. Sherriff Lachlan fatally wounded the stranger. The man’s skin started to peel off to reveal his real identity. He was the king of aliens.

Lachlan said “I’ve confronted this guy before he broke out of prison.” But now there were no more aliens. Suddenly there mum and dad fell out of the sky and broke a hole in the roof and broke the T.V. So they never brought pizza from there again.

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